Suggestion for Middle Eastern Group

I was so impressed with the footage and amount of information that this group seemed to have for their project. I especially enjoyed how the blogs were being read, while the footage rolled in the background. Perhaps one thing I would suggest would be to pick out some footage that could provide an introduction to your material, so that there is a brief summary of what your project is before you break into the blogs. I am so excited to see how your final project comes out!